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A/N: I am going to end them at three pages or four. Yes I said them since this is going to be a story.  

“And if any mischief follow, then thou shalt give life for life, Eye for eye, tooth for tooth, hand for hand, foot for foot, Burning for burning, wound for wound, stripe for stripe”

She told me not to step on the cracks
I told her not to fuss and relax
Pretty little face stopped me in my tracks
But now she sleeps with one eye open
That's the price she'll pay

Ciel was sitting at his desk filling piles and piles of bills. He sighed and pick up another stack of papers and growled softly. “This is boring.” He said to himself and place them down. He got up and walked over to the window, looking outside when he that very ghostly thin line of his old smile slightly. He watch as (Insert your first name) was playing with Pluto. Ciel looked away and walked to the study’s door. He started down the grand stairs to go to the garden.

“My lord?” Sebastian asked and tilts his head.Ciel sighed and looked at Sebastian. “To play with (Insert your first name) and Pluto.” He said and walked outside only to be glomped by someone. “CIEEEEEELLL! You CHANGED SO MUCH!!” Some high pitched girly voice said. Ciel eyes grew and shoved the girl off. “What the heck?” He asked. “ELIZABETH! Please don’t glomp my fiance!” (Insert your first name) asked and huffed. Ciel got up and help Elizabeth up as well. (Insert your name) ran up to them.

I took a knife and cut out her eye
I took it home and watched it wither and die
Well, she's lucky that I didn't slip her a smile
That's why she sleeps with one eye open
That's the price she'll pay

Ciel raise a brow and shook his head. “Why are you here Elizabeth? Does Aunt Frances know you are here?” Ciel asked and frowned more. “Oh yes, she wanted me to tell you that she would like to meet your fiance!” Elizabeth said happily and turn to (Insert your first name)  and narrowed her eyes. “I can hug my family member anytime I want (insert your first name).” She said as she smiled back to Ciel. Ciel sighed and shook his head.

“Why does Aunt Frances want to meet (Insert your first name) Elizabeth?” He asked and raise a brow. “To make sure that she wasn’t after your money, cause we believe that not the real (Insert your first name).” She whisper in his ears. Ciel’s eye widen and shook his head. “Why would you guys think that? Elizabeth.” Ciel whisper back as he watch (Insert your first name) play with Pluto, he felt something wasn’t was right. If she wasn't his love then why does she look like his love?

I said, hey, girl with one eye
Get your filthy fingers out of my pie
I said, hey, girl with one eye
I'll cut your little heart out cause you made me cry

‘She’s.... She'd have to be my love I lost long time ago!’ Ciel thought. Elizabeth frowned and let go of him. “Because, they found more bones and they appear to be female. If it be (Insert your first name)’s bones I just don’t want you to get hurt. Cause if it true that this isn’t (Insert your first name) then I know you want her head.” Elizabeth said. Ciel’s eyes widen and looked at his ‘fiance’, she was so much like (Insert your first name).

But could (Insert your first name) be telling the truth? He frowned at the thought. She has to be his. He smiled as he saw (Insert your name) drag Elizabeth away. He turned around to find Chiyoko. “Ciel, is something wrong?” She asked as he shook his head. “No, not at all.” He said and walked to Sebastian. “Sebastian, I want you to check into what exactly happen to (Insert your first name) family marder. That an order.” Ciel said as Sebastian raise a brow. “My lord?” Sebastian asked. “I need to know, I won’t be able to sleep when there a possible that (Insert your first name) isn’t really her.” Ciel said as Sebastian smirk. “Of  course my lord.” Sebastian said.

I slipped my hand under her skirt
I said don't worry, it's not gonna hurt
Oh, my reputation's kinda clouded with dirt
That's why you sleep with one eye open
But that's the price you pay


Once the sun had went down (Insert your first name) sighed and started to head into the Phantomhive garden and smile, it been too long since she was here. The garden that she used to always dream about. (Insert your first name)  slowly walk away from the building. She felt as if she was being followed. She was about to sit down when she heard something. She sighed and sit down and look around the garden before the feeling come back and saw a black figure.  

Once she saw the figure she shot right up from her seat. She turn around, when that happen her mouth was covered with cloth to muffle her screams and to knock her unconscious. She couldn’t but help to give in to the will of the drug and fall limb in the person’s arms. The last thing she heard was ‘Goodnight my sweet sweet little bluebird.’.

I said, hey, girl with one eye
Get your filthy fingers out of my pie
I said, hey, girl with one eye
I'll cut your little heart out cause you made me cry

Ciel woke up to a worry Elizabeth. “Elizabeth what are you doing here so early?” Ciel asked as she frowned. “What can’t I not come and be here when (Insert your first name) and you wake up? I want a grand ball!” Ciel grimaced and shook his head. “You know (Insert your first name) wouldn’t allow it even if I did.” Ciel said as Sebastian come in with a letter from the queen and a worry facial. “My lord, you have a letter from the queen. It have Lady (Insert your last name)’s family crest on it along with the queen one to.” Sebastian said.

That news had made Ciel bolted out of the bed. “Elizabeth please go, I’ll talk to you later.” Ciel said as Elizabeth paled and nodded. “Give me the letter now Sebastian!” Ciel said and held out his hand for the letter. Sebastian obey and handed it over to the young earl. As Ciel read the order his heart grew with the need of revenge. Who did these people are? Taking away his love?! His eyes narrow and looked at Sebastian. “Find out where (Insert your first name) was last night. She was kidnap. These people will need to pay!” Ciel growled.

You made me cry
You made me cry
You made me cry

Ciel walked to his fiance room and frowned. How could this happen to her? Why her? What was she hiding that got her to be kidnapped again? Ciel sighed and laid down on her bed trying to get some sleep. He was hoping that her scent could lure him into a peaceful slumber. He couldn’t still sleep. Maybe it was a bad choice for him to let his fiance live with him.  He knew what could happen. But he ignore it.

It been a troubling week for Ciel. He been growing very violently sick from worrying himself to where he won’t eat without throwing up, he won’t be eating. He haven’t been sleeping well. Ciel won’t get out of (Insert your first name)’s bed. “My lord, would you come out of there, I think I have an idea what will make you feel better.” Sebastian said coming into (Insert your first name)’s room. “Oh do you?” Ciel asked and raise a brow.

I said, hey, girl with one eye
Get your filthy fingers out of my pie
I said, girl with one eye
Get your filthy fingers out my pie

After a month of being sick and decide to get out of bed. It been hard on Ciel. But he swear he will find who did this to (Insert your first name) and kill them! Ciel didn't know that there was a young lady who was sent by the kidnappers to tease and mess with him.  When Ciel went downstairs he froze seeing what appear to be (insert your first name) little did he that her real name was Victoria. “(Insert your first name)?!” Ciel asked hopeful. Victoria who look like (Insert your first name) smile and title her head and walked up to him. “I-I thought you were gone forever!? Who did this?” Ciel asked as Victoria ‘tried’ to speak. When nothing come Ciel raise a brow.

“Are you okay?” Ciel asked as Victoria nodded. She wasn’t to talk no matter what. She couldn’t blew her cover. She was to keep Ciel from thinking they were going to kill (Insert your first name if she wouldn’t give them what they want.  Ciel sighed and look at Victoria. Why did he feel wrong about her? Ciel knew it was his love right? But there something odd about this. Why didn’t she have her eye-patch wasn’t on her.

I said, hey, girl with one eye
Get your filthy fingers out of my pie
I said, hey, girl with one eye
I'll cut your little heart out cause you made me cry

Sebastian glare at VIctoria, he knew nothing is right with her. This (Insert you first name) isn’t her. He was going to find out who this is. And if CIel want to deny it cause she look like Lady (Insert your last name), Sebastian look at Chiyoko who was glaring at Victoria. Sebastian smirk and slowly walk up to the young lord. “My master, it seem I need to speak with you and so does Chiyoko.” Sebastian said and smirk when he saw Ciel pale and walk up to his office. “What is this about Sebastian?” CIel asked as Sebastian frowned.

“(Insert your first name) isn’t the real one. I look into what happen like you said it look like (Insert your first name) had a twin and that person down stair is her twin, so I think that she helped whoever did this to their family and kidnapped (Insert your first name) again and they want something from the poor girl my lord.” Sebastian said as Chiyoko nodded. “That is the truth she had one but she didn't know what happen to her. The twin name is Victoria (Insert your last name).” Chiyoko said and frowned. “WHat should I do?” Ciel asked. “Don’t act like anything wrong, just act like you never heard this.” Chiyoko and Sebastian said as Ciel growled. “I can’t just sit back!” CIel said.
First chapter: toribagans.deviantart.com/art/…
Song: Florence And The Machine - Girl With One Eye
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:iconkateyuriko:
KateYuriko Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Make more plz! I luv this :D
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:icontygerswyft:
Tygerswyft Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lolz! I don't have a twin, but my character's name is Violet! Victoria and Violet sound like twins!PUKE Dignity Laugh 
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Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014   General Artist
MOAR
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:iconlovekitsunenaru:
lovekitsunenaru Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
=) i like your storry meow 
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AnnabelleRoseWolf Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
Please continue
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Bakuganlover100 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Student Artist
Omg hahahahhaha I have a year-younger sis named Victoria 
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Tazerkaye Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Ohhh my twin is now a girl.... HEY BRO YOU'RE A GIRL NOW AHHAHAHAHHAH
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0lexdelapp Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
onion head "shock" HOW DID YOU KNOW THAT I HAD A TWIN?!?!?! But, his, name is Eli. Not Victoria. (Thankfully not identical, I'm so glad that I don't look like a boy :P)
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YukiSuoh01 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Good story
please make part3 soon
and do you mind send me the link to part3 please if you done makin' it ?
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:icontoribagans:
toribagans Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Here is the link to chapter 3 toribagans.deviantart.com/art/…
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